Advice From a Professional

I was lucky enough be be given advice and feedback from a professional magazine editor/creator called Phil from UWE. He said he really liked the idea of my magazine and that it was unique. He said the colour scheme works really well (red white and black) and the neon green writing for all the online references makes them stand out and that my photography was excellent.

Things he told me i could edit/improve on:

• i need to check my spelling on my DPS and underline a bit i've forgot to underline.
• i should credit the photographs on the 'Thekla' page.
• to separate the bit about photographers at events at the bottom of the "Thekla' page, because it looks like part of the paragraph above.
• try to add more words to the end of the description of Thekla because the last line only has one word.
• try to make the list of pages on the contents into two neat columns, not one and a half.